Interesting write. When one is bitten by evil, it can destroy the body, but a powerful love can replinish it and heal it. Satan is no match to our loving Jesus. Keep up the great work.

Wow, what a strong poem. I loved the metaphor of how Satan dispenses spiritual poison. But, you know, that experience may only make you stronger in your commitment to the Lord. After all, Peter's own "failure" (in the form of denying Christ) merely strengthened his resolve to serve as the rock of the Church. Keep writing!

"And the Lord said, Satan hath desired to have you, that he may sift you as wheat: But I have prayed for thee, that thy faith fail not."-Luke 22:31-32

I had to replace the chapter, so here is the review someone left for this poem:

aaidenkae 2005-06-27 ch 1, signed a good poem. but it doesnt end there. does it? is God back to slowly draw out the venom? to raise you to your feet and give you a hug? i dearly hope so. *smiles* he can take away your deepest hurt and forgive your most terrible sins. id like to see a second part to this poem. keep writing and thank you.-aaidenkae

xx goodnight: aaidenkae 2005-06-27 ch 1, signed a good poem. but it doesnt end there. does it? is God back to slowly draw out the venom? to raise you to your feet and give you a hug? i dearly hope so. *smiles* he can take away your deepest hurt and forgive your most terrible sins. id like to see a second part to this poem. keep writing and thank you.-aaidenkae

a good poem. but it doesnt end there. does it? is God back to slowly draw out the venom? to raise you to your feet and give you a hug? i dearly hope so. *smiles* he can take away your deepest hurt and forgive your most terrible sins. id like to see a second part to this poem. keep writing and thank you.-aaidenkae