Um, I'm sorry, but this poem sounds kind of lesbian-ish. Not thats there's anyhting wrong with homosexuallity. I personally support gay rights and abortions just because I belive in having a say in your life. Anyway. This is really good. The repition is really nice. Bravo!

Wow, that is nice, very emotional, I like the part, 'heaven help me', that's a cool bit. Five stars dog!

*Rojer.