I loved the imagery and earnestness of this.

A bit straightforward, but in a way that only excentuated the meaning of this peice. Interesting...Great job and thanks for the reivew.

wow. haha. drink up. i love the ending. good job, its nice

"Love me raw and I will be your broken lover". Kick ** line. Simply kick **. Looks like you had spacing problems for them, hm?

Where did this come from? It is good, and conveys more than a few emotions. :)

Grips you from the start. Bitter-sweet and erotic, but thoughtful. Review me sometime, i'd love to hear your opinion.

~Shavo

Very dark and ridged.It flows really well.

interesting... i really like your work...

quite an interesting piece. I like the flow and the kind of story like flow. Great work!

~Sorrow~

Behinds the nothings lies love and affection...behind

wow powerful ending... amazing poem

Awesome poem!

Oh-so dark. Gotta love it. The cynicism of it makes me smile.

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I like these feelings that run rampant across the screen, delightedly dirty and darkness burning fierce.

This rocks, awesome job!

Hey, I like it! Ah, the bitter irony of life, eh?