beautiful language, nice emotion... please review some of my poems it will be much apreciated.

very nice

Why did I feel so connected to this? *pondering* - well written and plays on the soul, heats the blood through the veins...nicely done and nice ending.

The first and second stanzas were kinda hard to read, but really it was an amazing poem. I loved it and once you can get accustomed to the flow its gorgeous. caliorbust