so sad...but good :)

wow. that was good. Very sad, very sad, but very good. Keep writing and great job

good bye is one of the hardest things to say, all right. ~emmap.s.stephen lynch rules!

your comments have made my day. call me crazy but to me it seems our writing is very similar? thank you for both your review on dear anonymous and shadowed - i needed to hear that! i love this poem it's very simple but the emotion is definately there. don't change it. the last line is perfect! ~evaa