Powerful haiku. Good job. :)

brilliant. this is pure unadultured genius.

* noelle

I wonder what my mother would say. first I know she'd massacre me...then we'd have to see.

And thank you sincerely for your review.

this brought a smile to my face for the most peculiar reason...great work!

tuesday

Oh this is sweet _- A nice request that even I agree too. Good job!

sounds like my bf... nice job... love the title

powerful no doubt. -ADD

Hey, that's a great haiku. Using just a few words it's really powerful.

*lime-girl*

Sounds about right... Everybody wants to at some point or another. Sweet, gentle way of putting it, showing that you still are (at least partially) a child, but long to be on you own, to go your own way... Nice.

Interesting way to a plea, but I like it.

wow! this haiku is amazing! whenever i wrte haikus my teachers say something like; Good try sweetie.

but this is fabulous!

thanks for reviewing my poem the only girl who can change the world- i didn't mean to put it in humor!

lol,nikki

but the haikus excellent!

Excellent haiku. So excellent. _ I absolutely love this haiku! It's so good! Write on!

Anna