|Reviews for Freedom|
| DathomiranSciFiAuthor 12/21/05 . chapter 1
Powerful haiku. Good job. :)
| poetic abortion 10/2/05 . chapter 1
brilliant. this is pure unadultured genius.
| Alas A. Nock 7/16/05 . chapter 1
I wonder what my mother would say. first I know she'd massacre me...then we'd have to see.
And thank you sincerely for your review.
| lackluster 7/4/05 . chapter 1
this brought a smile to my face for the most peculiar reason...great work!
| Sagaciouspnay 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Oh this is sweet _- A nice request that even I agree too. Good job!
| simpleplan13 6/30/05 . chapter 1
sounds like my bf... nice job... love the title
| arcane devices 6/29/05 . chapter 1
powerful no doubt. -ADD
| katmonkey 6/29/05 . chapter 1
Hey, that's a great haiku. Using just a few words it's really powerful.
| Saeger 6/28/05 . chapter 1
Sounds about right... Everybody wants to at some point or another. Sweet, gentle way of putting it, showing that you still are (at least partially) a child, but long to be on you own, to go your own way... Nice.
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/28/05 . chapter 1
Interesting way to a plea, but I like it.
| blackbirdfly 6/28/05 . chapter 1
wow! this haiku is amazing! whenever i wrte haikus my teachers say something like; Good try sweetie.
but this is fabulous!
thanks for reviewing my poem the only girl who can change the world- i didn't mean to put it in humor!
but the haikus excellent!
| Princess-anna57 6/28/05 . chapter 1
Excellent haiku. So excellent. _ I absolutely love this haiku! It's so good! Write on!