That was a really nice story. I really cannot describe how lovely I found it. Yay you!

*nods emphatically* this is my new favorite story. or at least it's right up there. I like it a lot. while there is a bit too much "telling" instead of showing, it doesn't really detract much from the tale as a whole. This is humorous, suspenseful, and i like the touch of romance at the end.

i like.

:) CD

Flying camels. I love it. I LOVE it!!

:) CD

This is getting interesting!

I love the way this story grabs you right from the first sentance. I like the way it's written: simple, but not grade 2. This is really interesting so far!! I'm off to read more!

way too many chapters. You need to use the chapter feature here. You've been reported