Aw... that was dearly heartbreaking. Very sad, but I suppose it had to be done, right?

This story is very endearing; I especially love how the two met in the beginning. I actually find it somewhat funny and cute at just how persistent she is. I don't think that I could ever bring myself to talk to a wall, haha. :)

But anyway, I loved your characters, both of them. It's sad that she had to leave him, considering the fact that she was the best thing that ever happened to him, but at least she left behind a valuable lesson. But you know, honestly, if I were him, I don't think that I would be able to ever open up again.

Sorry if my thoughts seem scattered, that's pretty much how I am most of the time. But as long as you get my gist, that's all that matters.

And grammer-wise, there were a few errors, but they're minor details. (Like 'ever' should be 'never' and 'he' should be 'she') It didn't take away anything from the story, so as I said before, they're minor. Really, wonderful story though!

~xflawed

P.S. Thanks so much for your comment/suggestion on Names! =) (youngwriters101)

very nicely narrated. i really like the idea. i think it's ver creative. keep up the amazing work. =0)

ps. could you read tragic traitor tactics? i'd appreciate your feedback.