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| poet tree 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is truly great. Your rhyming is astonishing; usually people rhyme one-syllable words like "hate" and "fate"--but you rhyme solution and narcissism. I'm putting this on my favorites list. Good job! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI love the parts in between the thick stanzas, they have such electrifying energy! Quite powerful. Just one thing: was this supposed to be a poem, or fiction. I think it's in the section of fiction... |
| swift sky silver 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abusevery angsty. nice how you can describe the thoughts so well =0) |