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Reviews For: The Grim Knife Murderer

poet tree
2005-07-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is truly great. Your rhyming is astonishing; usually people rhyme one-syllable words like "hate" and "fate"--but you rhyme solution and narcissism. I'm putting this on my favorites list. Good job!
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-06-28
ch 1,
abuseI love the parts in between the thick stanzas, they have such electrifying energy! Quite powerful. Just one thing: was this supposed to be a poem, or fiction. I think it's in the section of fiction...
swift sky silver
2005-06-28
ch 1,
abusevery angsty. nice how you can describe the thoughts so well =0)
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