ahcooleo

quite an interesting piece. I like the flow and the rhythm. great work

~Sorrow~

I love the incorporation of normal things, like business with sadness.

Oh! Ooh ooh ooh I like this so much! I like the way you wrote with the "lip-gloss". Love the multiple-meanings I have found in that word now. xD

o.

i dont know why, but this poem says bit and backstab.

oh, those kind of girls, really ** me off.

but only for the stated facts that they are whores, but thats their business not mine.

Hm...so innocent and so...experienced (maybe?) at the asme time. Love it.

Whoa! Risk-ay! I love this one!

another excellent piece...u are and excellent poet...i love how in your work u seem to have two side of the story...excellent job

~Laura