interesting. beautiful too!

very good work. well detailed and the meaning to this is clear. outstanding!

~Sorrow~

Wow, that was just awesome! The title kinda threw me off because my friend told me a different definition for lust. But either way this was just awesome! Keep it up! ^-^

Beatifully written, as always. I love the start and the comparisions very interesting.

Keep it up.

Pricey Perfection? I don't know. Sorry out of ideas for a title... :D But I like the poem.

i guess theres no thing as a lustless passion (or maybe so.)

nice poem, it was interesting to read.

Beautifully done...The way you inserted the part about the pool was genuis, a girl with childhood still clinging to her jumping into love, lust...Sorry about the rambling...

wow really intresting...but it is nicely doon. good job. ~jenny~

oh...what desire in this poem. Dark and mysterious, but fantastic! i love it!

And thank you oh so much for your kind review! Keep in touch!

this piece is an excellent piece cause it looks at the emotions of the poeple and the way lust can get to u...and it flows really well to..amazing poem..

~Laura