OH MY GOD!

Best story ever, seriously!

I'm checking now to see if they're anymore stories in this series!

ANd I love COugar! and they're a team! YAY!

millie xx.

P.S. please continue writing.

P.P.S. I love Cougar POV.

*ahem*
Sorry for saying this but... GET YOUR BUTT IN GEAR WOMAN!
I need the second book...!
Emailme as soon as possibleon updatesplease!
(x_e.)

Very very good. One of the better fics i have read online. Please hurry with the sequal!

I think you have the beginning of an awsome series! I really like how you developed the relationship between Amber and Cougar without changing either of their personalities. I really want to see what happens next, keep writing!

I liked the way you did that ending. And...I liked the whole story, a lot...I think I'm going to put it on my favorites list. sorry I don't have much more to say, though. :) Thanks!
Ashe

Okay. Okay, so I haven't reviewed before, but I had to review this one. Sorry.
I like the way you're not giving away Cougar's full past all at once, and the way you're just giving little hints, little glimpses--it's neat. ...And I like Cougar, too--just thought I'd put that out there. :)
How are they going to get out of this one? I have to go read more! :)
*Ashe*

I just saw the words "Sword" and "Tristan" and almost screamed. I LOVE Arthurian-related stories! :) The structure of this is way good and I'm going to have to print it off to read it all. I suddenly feel very inept at my writing. I bow at your feet. It is WAY good so far, and I've only read the first page! :)

Finally more! And masterfully written too--very detailed and conveying the feelings of your characters just the right away.

Can't wait to see the rest of it.

Where's more?!

That was all :( I want to read on!

I think you did pretty well with the POV change. Won't hear any complaining about them from me.

Cougher is one really handsome.. uh.. cougar. hehehe I liked this chapter a whole lot--you did great with describing the grace of the feline.

Having read "Enemies Closer" I'm beginning to think that Cougar is more than just a mutant with slight traits of a feline. Punch me if I'm wrong :D

"A proposal" was so far the best chapter I read of this whole story. I might encounter others that I like just as much--but the dialogue between Amber and Cougar, and your carefully described actions of the 'mutant' made me fall in love with him. (not to be taken in that context, but I think you know what I mean)

There are a few typos and grammatical errors that I picked up, but it the story is still reading fluently. I wished I could have a bound book with the printed version ;)

And just how could she have stolen it anyway? Pfrrt, that he's even just considering it.

Your writing continues to impress me in this chapter and had my eyes glued to the screen even though I think I should have gotten some work done instead.

You write very professionally. Publishing material I would say.

I was searching low and high on your devART page, trying to catch a glimpse of your story somewhere--until I finally spotted your signature in one of the replies.

Ten minutes later I'm dying to read the next chapter--but also hesitant because there arent all too many chapters and I don't want a story to end too quickly.

Anyway, I just plain out love what I read so far. You have an incredible talent with both your words and the pencil. What a great match.

The descriptions are so vivid and detailed that I could picture everything perfectly--and the bits and pieces of characterisation are woven into the story in a very fluent manner.

Just thought I'd say that.