Reviews for The Story of Viren

Wena61 2006-01-04 ch 2,	Although you thank the reader they should be thanking you, your an amazing writer. Can't wait for chapter three!
umbrius 2005-09-05 ch 2,	Joe: must read more. Kyr: You need to read these before posting, I am finding more and more spelling and grammar errors in every post. Joe: (Kicks Kyrs shin and clears throat) AHEM!! Kyr: (Rubs my shin) other than that, its very good.
umbrius 2005-09-05 ch 1,	Joe: nice Kyr: Very interesting. Both: On to the next chapter!
Trajo 2005-07-03 ch 2,	haha, this dude would drive me crazy. just reading a page or so and then id have to wait till tomorrow, lol. but it makes for a good story. your spelling was better this time :-D
Trajo 2005-07-03 ch 1,	hm... you intrigue me. I like the way that you wrote a story within a story. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing unreadable. I like it, and I shall read more if it chooses to appear.
Eyetk 2005-06-28 ch 1,	Er. Sorry, but you really need to double-space your paragraphs. It's unreadable, as is. By the way, it's "More to come so motivate me to write!" (corrected spelling, etc). Please, please run this through a spell-checker: w.spellcheck.net