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| Yokotaashi 2005-08-28 ch 1,   | I can relate, its good! |
| teen-angel14 2005-08-25 ch 1, | MY BOYFRIEND IS GROUNDED! I miss him so much... :-D I wish he wasn't. And when I've been with him, it's just like, I don't want it to end, and when it does, I wonder how long I'm going to have to wait for the next time he holds me. I can relate that, and I love this one. Keep it up! |
| ShadyPrincess 2005-08-10 ch 1, | Wow. ^^ That was really good. I'm currently in a long distance relationship, and while I'm not sure if that is the exact reference you were making here, I do believe that you did a wonderful job in even portraying the feelings of people in that situation. Thank you for review my story. ^^ By the way, the second chapter of it is up. |
| DailyLatte 2005-06-30 ch 1, | Thanks for the review you gave me. It makes me happy I write things that people can relate to. I really like this poem. My favorite stanza is probably the thrid one because thats how i feel everyday about my boyfriend. Anyway, look forward to reading more of your stuff. *DailyLatte* |
| Darthen 2005-06-28 ch 1, | 'Tis a small world when someone I don't know can write something that hits so extremely close to home. 'Tis a very small world. It's a good poem. It almost has a lyrical quality to it. Good Job. |
| lackluster 2005-06-28 ch 1, | i didn't really *feel* it, but i can relate...great job, nonetheless!! |
| TheBrokenWanderer 2005-06-28 ch 1, | okay? OKAY? That was GREAT! okay...well...i love things that are sad...as i'm sure you know now that you've read some of my stuff...thanx for the review by the way...anyway...keep writing...don't let your insane notion that poetry is hard to write keep you from writing it anyway... |
| in theory 2005-06-28 ch 1, | Subduing. Very pretty though, nicely written. |