|Reviews for Eyes|
| Slowly Sinking 6/28/05 . chapter 1
Very powerfully written, if a little hard to follow - but I feel that just adds to the emotion. Brilliantly written.
| swift sky silver 6/28/05 . chapter 1
you describe the line of thought pretty well. i like how you ended it. it gave a good impact. keep up the great work. 0)
ps could u please read tragic traitor tactics? i'd appreciate your feedback