awsome

keep up the good work! :D

your friend
A Dark Rose

I enjoyed the repitition! It added an effect. ^_^

"But where are they really?"Was a great line, of philosophical-ish proportions.It has a nice sound to it and simplicity, but if you dig under the surface and overrationalize it...*shudders* Too much thinking. Keep writing!

Thought I'd check out some more of your work. I quite like the message in this. That we will find what is lost as it the memory is always with us and we need to be strong enough to remember and learn from everything. Only thing I noticed was that you put no where instead of nowhere but very good. Luv Kaitx

I know I read this before, but I can't for the life of me figure out why I didn't review this.

Like Mack, I'm not good at critiquing poems, I can write them and I enjoy reading them, but I can never give a good review on them.

All I can say is that this was a marvelous poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

~Ty

im sorry im not good at critiquing poems...but as a girl who enjoys reading them i can assure you that this one caught my attention and held it. good job

Mack

very cute poem. I like it

the repetition had an impact, it played a lare part, good or bad i'm not really sure. The poem itself had an interesting theme and was quite well written.

It was bit confusing with all of the repeating words in the beginning; but it was still quite nice!

-lav