Hm..I didn't like this one so much...and not because I'm an athiest..but..it seems too...narrow-minded?

Not exactly the word I had in mind...

But meh. That aside, I did like the way it flowed )

I thought this poem kinda sucked. I mean, kinda hard to explain why.

This is a good poem! So true. D Keep up the gr8 work!

I wrote 'Only Then' for a friend of mine, btw thanks so much for the review!

Note: The last line: Praise the Lord! Amen! Is not part of the poem. It was a note meant to be thrown in at the top. Revised it, should be fized soon.