Loved the emotions and wow, that was sad...

Wow that was really deep and sad. I love it!

I particularly like the second and third stanzas. The rhythm in the second especially emphasizes how what you're asking isn't something BIG and WOW and "drama[tic]," but something seemingly simple.

You touched on some of the saddest parts of living and conveyed the emotions from them so well. I especially loved the 3rd stanza. It just spoke to me.

I get like this sometiems. Where you just can't get all the pain outta your head, even if things are currently going ok. Yea, i think alot about 'who i used to be'...i guess though, you can't let it get to you. Well good luck finding the 'you' you've become, but thing is, all you've doen is change, your still the same person somewhere. Whether that person was good or bad.

ANN

i like it...the flow is constant and you have worded it well...you vent a lot and so much emotion comes through...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~

nicely done piece, beautifully captured and remakably done.

~* noelle