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Aithwayth 2005-06-28 . chapter 1
You know... i never noticed the repetition in this before... but it could have been the assignment to reuse the words after so many lines... *scratches head* That was so long ago and I can't remember.
Unholy Haven 2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Feels like a solitary walk filled with memories and meditative calm. Nice, but it seems like you started reusing the same words and descriptions halfway through the poem. Perhaps it was intentional, but it seemed a little repetitive to me.
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