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somefreakylooknchick 2005-08-04 . chapter 1
can totally relate. ugh. little bloodsucking vermins
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-06 . chapter 1
True in many ways.
Ballerina with a Gun 2005-06-30 . chapter 1
I think I know what motivated this poem ;)

Realistic, and I can relate to it. It expands to grade school children and adults. Well-written.
Eyetk 2005-06-30 . chapter 1
Hmm.

I dunno, but somehow the 'at the drop of an anvil' seems to contradict the 'for no real reason'.

If it was the drop of something really -small-, it might work, but if it's an anvil, it implies that it's rather large and heavy..if you take it metaphorically, something important.

Then again, this might have been meant to be condradictory in this matter. Just a thought!
swtdreamz101 2005-06-29 . chapter 1
hmm well i'd say anyone who's not you or your family would be a social enemy, well except perhaps friends. everyone wants to climb the social ladder. good job
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