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| Unholy Haven 2005-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseVery unexpected ending! But some of the lines seems a little incongruous to me. For example, it seems to be both clear and rainy at the same time. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. |