My dear, I may be something of a cynic, and certainly a lover of irony, but to me, your poem sounds a little too Christian for my taste. What cares the Goddess if you doubt? It is not a sin, only a way of figuring out your beliefs. Eventually, even doubt affirms the divine.

Okay, so that got slightly self-righteous. (now look who's being too Christian!) Just some thoughts.

Sno

this is beautiful and i can really not offer you any higher or deeper praise than that.

merry part and blessed be.