|Reviews for generic landscape views|
| if sighing 7/27/05 . chapter 1
"tie a ribbon around the something something something"
I love the third stanza, the whole thing was just er, rich, er, a tame ferocity.
yesyes, a tame ferocity (but not too)
| this is britt 7/12/05 . chapter 1
really good- I'm sorry for my lack of reviews lately- but it was excellent. the red ribbons made me think of "Not the Red Baron."
| smile persephone 6/30/05 . chapter 1
'shoved under my fingernails are your postcards/with their scalloped edges and generic landscape views' Brilliance. The style works beautifully here and I just love it. Lovelylovely.
| FFF5EE 6/29/05 . chapter 1
this is such a unique poem. i like how vague or utterly stomping it is. i don't know if you understand what i mean by that but it reminds me of how i'm writing nowadays _