"tie a ribbon around the something something something"

I love the third stanza, the whole thing was just er, rich, er, a tame ferocity.

yesyes, a tame ferocity (but not too)

exquisite

really good- I'm sorry for my lack of reviews lately- but it was excellent. the red ribbons made me think of "Not the Red Baron."

'shoved under my fingernails are your postcards//with their scalloped edges and generic landscape views' Brilliance. The style works beautifully here and I just love it. Lovelylovely.

this is such a unique poem. i like how vague or utterly stomping it is. i don't know if you understand what i mean by that but it reminds me of how i'm writing nowadays ^_^