I love this. Just a question: was the second half supposed to be in italics? Or is it another mode of thought from the narrator and we must distinguish between the two? Loved the summary to this, you always have such wonderful summaries.

whoa. Seems to have such innuendos hidden, messages just under the surface...Beautiful!

this was strangely beautiful. it kept me into it and it had a nice ending.

very good work. this has so much reality to it that it has amazed me. great work

~Sorrow~

aw, but teenagers don't seem that innocent, most of the time.

interesting, virgin eyes comes in this subject to, along with many subjects.

i liked this.

That's amazing. The flow, rhythm, and rhyme are perfect, the lines clever and hiding those oh-so-stained dirty fingers behind proclamations that youth still equals innocence. oh, i love it.

-jess

hey, thanx for the review! greatly appreciated! this poem/song is AWESOME! ur vocab is so advanced, i couldnt understand half the words (but thats cos my vocab is very limited) but still, this poem is great. its long, and the layout is excellent. to be honest, im a great fan of rhyming poems, and this struck me as incredible. i cant believe no one has reviewed it yet! going on my favs! FABULOUS work!