Confusing but facinating. Good job!

b e a u t i f u l but confusing...i liked it!

Very different but beautiful all the same. I like it! And thanks for the review. =)

It breathes of self-denial, this one. I like it a lot.

dramatic to the core. my body just felt numb after reading this, I can't tell you how much I am amazed by the word use, the diction. its all so beautifully captured, done in such a unique prespective. beautifully done, I find mysel illiterate when it comes to my review for this.

~* noelle

Emotionally charged, such innocent anger...Fantastic.

oh wow..this is so beautiful. i'm not sure what makes this so beautiful. the format is unique and this poem is awesome.

once again very touching. this is really good. I love the flow and the detail. course...it does have that reality to it. no matter what...someone isn't a virgin in some way

~Sorrow~

sounds like purity coming from something that wishes it were.

either it isn't or its not completly sure.

interesting poem, i liked it.

A bit confusing, but very good. =D

I don't really get this, but the first part to me seems like the persona wantsto be ignorant, trying to maintain her, i think its a her, innocence. actually i have no idea...

P.s thanks for the review, and although you seem to like it i really don't so i took it down, thanks anyway. ^^