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| vampy08 2006-10-17 ch 11, | abuseok so add me as a friend please...cause I have to have more of this story...k thank you |
| Takishia 2006-10-05 ch 11, | abuseI would love to continue reading the story, but do I need an LJ account for you to add me in as a friend? |
| summers-end 2006-09-30 ch 10, | abuseI love your characters! Update more and soon! summers-end |
| Nghi 2006-09-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis story is fantasmically wonderful. I think the story's going in a Sekka/Jinx direction, but that's just my preference, really. ;) The emo-ness doesn't really bother me because there are actual reasons for it, which is wonderful. I love the interactions between the two, and I can't really decide which of the two is in a worse situation.-Michael is creepy, and that is that. I love Jinx because he sounds deliciously hot and angsty all at the same time. Sekka sounds really pretty, but her mom is a bit of an **, and I hate assy people. >:| Brian and Janette are a hoot, and I'm even liking David Webbiner. All likeable characters, a very enjoyable plot.-Although I have to admit, I was so, so terrified of this story turning out to be one of those depressing ones. I mean, the subjects are really dark and depressing, but I mean 100% angst-in-your-face. It's actually not too bad, and I could definitely stomach it, but then again, it's 3:30 in the morning, and I'm seeing double. XD-Keep going, please! Although I really have no right to say that, since I haven't updated in like, four months. >_>;-Nghi |
| Kendal 2006-08-28 ch 10, | abuseI am so overdue for a long, detailed review. That said, I am sick, and miserable, and it's just not going to happen. Can't wait to see the further complexities in their characters, and you know I love this. |
| brittle hearts 2006-08-26 ch 10, | abuseThis is a brilliant story. I'm surprised that not many have reviewed it. Please update soon! :) |
| Kjersti 2006-08-08 ch 10, anon. | abuseVery very good chapter. I loved it. Well, except for the fight and Jinx practically admitting he pukes on purpose.Can't wait to read more. |
| Party-In-The-Rain 2006-08-06 ch 10, | abuseI liked that you brought Erinn more into this chapter. It shows that Sekka has a life other than Jinx. Plus, Erinn is rather entertaining. Oh, and a random compliment, this has got to be one of the best stories (if no the best) on fictionpress. |
| vampy08 2006-08-05 ch 10, | abuseI read all the chapters just now and i love it. It's really confuseing at the beginning when he 'connects' with the lightening or whatever. I just don't get it...But other then that your story is really good, and I can tell you when it gets publish I'll buy a book... |
| RedBerries 2006-08-03 ch 10, | abuseMan...why is Sekka getting so mad? |
| Mardy-Bum-Barrel-Of-A-Gun 2006-08-02 ch 10, | abuseJinx was being stupid this chapter. I still love 'em though. Great Job. |
| HeartsQuiverInFear 2006-08-02 ch 10, | abuseaw..you're very welcome my dear :) have an awesome time on your trip!anyways..this chapter was really interesting..poor Jinx..he always seems to get into the worst of troubles. Ahaha i love how Sekka drove away with his car..she's an awesome character. So...once again..keep up the amazing work :) i'll be waiting for your update. |
| HeartsQuiverInFear 2006-08-01 ch 9, | abuseso..i think i just spent the past 2 hours reading this..and i must say that it left me speechless :) I'm extremely picky with stories..but this one is just..amazing! i LOVE your writing style, and the way you describe things..it's a shame that you havent update for nearly two months though; but then i know how busy life is so i wont hold it against you :P anyways..i just wanted you to know that i've fallen in love with this story and cant wait for your update :) Keep up the awesome work! |
| Kjersti 2006-07-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseHuh. Somehow I skipped a chapter. It (chapter 8) was great. Well, in a depressing sort of way, of course. I loved it. I also like Daniel, although he really should be home more often... Then Jinx's mum wouldn't get to boss over him quite so much.I love this story. It's amazing.Oh, and glad you like my name! :) |
| PrincessFlorea 2006-06-20 ch 9, | abuseMortal Kombat? Hope that's old school enough for him, as it certainly isn't Mario. : P |