I wish more people would realize how serious these situations actually are. I wish people made a bigger deal out of these situations in general.

I enjoyed reading this, though at the same time it just makes me so mad on how people are able to live their lives doing such horrible, HORRIBLE things. Not to mention how SOME people can get away with it. I love how it was written. The point of view of a youngling who's still yet to figure out what "sex" truly is.

*Faves*

My gosh, that was so sad...it's true, innocence is so easily stolen.

very true...innocence is so easily stolen...

oh my goodness, this was so frightening & heartbreaking to read.

it's so raw & honest, it gives me the chills.

great job! :D

This gives me the shivers. It's very well written but its unnverving at the same time. *shudders*. I hate how things like this happen all the time.

wowz this was perfectly written... it shows how easily innocence can be stolen

Godawfully sad, but written very well, and gets the feel of a child in this situation across oh so well. Really made me think. Awesome job.

omg...this is amazing. I it.

Wow..That was good, sad, but good :). Not something I would read, but it was good. You use good description in this.

CK

Definitely creepy, and I've never actually read a poem like it. I enjoy it though. I can't tell if I like it as much as the other's I've read from you or not, and yet it's still hauntingly good.

Poignant, touching, and truly heartbreaking. It really depicts the thought process of a child when something…like that…happens. I know from personal experience and all I can say is thank you. Thank you for this brilliant piece of prose, and please keep up the good work!

Terence the Terrible

Even though I'm not into pedophilia that much... I loved it. Many relatives in my past have been pedophiles, and it's no fun having the blood of pedophiles in your veins, but... I did appreciate it.

Dolly

Sad, it doesn't ryhme, and it has a hard-to-find rythm. Still good though.

AW...that was so so sad. God...I really hope you aren't speaking from experience, because that is absolutely heartbreaking, and so REAL. I just...i have no words...i'm speechless. Great...GREAT poem.

Shavo

Gulp. Wow, very creepy and serial.