whoa these particular themes and vocab have been through me in the past few months (offline). i am going to read all the rest from here up until the present. keep writing and i'll keep relating...and probably reviewing. lol

i like the 'flow' of this piece... haha... i know, lame joke, but really, it was great. keep writing 0)

Beautiful...I love how it rhymes. I can never seem to make anything rhyme without it being stupid. Sorry I took so long to give you a review, I've been really busy with stuff.

I like the poem it is very beautiful! Oh I also wanted to say thank you for reading my story ( I added a new chapter by the way -)

sad... i like the poem.. the whole water thing is great.. and i love the last line

Beautiful poem, it seems lonely and sad. I like how it rhymes, especially since I don't find very many poems that rhyme anymore.

Aw. So sad but so hopeful...enough to make your reader want to cry from the ache it leaves.

great poem! i love the last stanza, really wraps it up well. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

very good and detailed. this is very splendid. I love the flow and this is just great

Sorrow

Thanks for reviewing my story! I really love your poem. It's simple, but has so much meaning in it and I liked your rhyming scheme. I wish I could do poetry O Hope you write more soon. Seems like you have so many fans that like your writing _

-Sapphire Wings

As expected of you kokoro-san, this was a wonderful poem. Your words get more powerful as you post each and every poem. -ADD

it's amazing to read someone else's writing like yours, this one in particular, because it is something i feel and can relate to i think. and what amazes me more is how it reminds me of the things i would write, yet i really like yours more _

Interesting. It was a bit confusing but maybe that's just me. It flowed nicely though. Good job.

it seems hopeful, you don't get that as often anymore.

hope, trust, faith.

words i dont usually think of.

delish poem dear.

great poem... the rhymes worked well... (except pain and again... my pet peeve is when ppl rhyme words with again, lol) the wording was great... good job... btw, if u have time, please r&r my work, especially 'once in a blue moon'... i'm dying for honest reviews... thanx...