|Reviews for Flow|
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle 8/7/05 . chapter 1
whoa these particular themes and vocab have been through me in the past few months (offline). i am going to read all the rest from here up until the present. keep writing and i'll keep relating...and probably reviewing. lol
| swift sky silver 7/3/05 . chapter 1
i like the 'flow' of this piece... haha... i know, lame joke, but really, it was great. keep writing 0)
| Ethereal Silver 7/3/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful...I love how it rhymes. I can never seem to make anything rhyme without it being stupid. Sorry I took so long to give you a review, I've been really busy with stuff.
| Darksakura21 7/2/05 . chapter 1
I like the poem it is very beautiful! Oh I also wanted to say thank you for reading my story ( I added a new chapter by the way -)
| simpleplan13 7/1/05 . chapter 1
sad... i like the poem.. the whole water thing is great.. and i love the last line
| liz anya 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem, it seems lonely and sad. I like how it rhymes, especially since I don't find very many poems that rhyme anymore.
| account not in use 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Aw. So sad but so hopeful...enough to make your reader want to cry from the ache it leaves.
| KwazyKandyPie 6/30/05 . chapter 1
great poem! i love the last stanza, really wraps it up well. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/29/05 . chapter 1
very good and detailed. this is very splendid. I love the flow and this is just great
| Sapphire Wings 6/29/05 . chapter 1
Thanks for reviewing my story! I really love your poem. It's simple, but has so much meaning in it and I liked your rhyming scheme. I wish I could do poetry O Hope you write more soon. Seems like you have so many fans that like your writing _
| arcane devices 6/29/05 . chapter 1
As expected of you kokoro-san, this was a wonderful poem. Your words get more powerful as you post each and every poem. -ADD
| FFF5EE 6/29/05 . chapter 1
it's amazing to read someone else's writing like yours, this one in particular, because it is something i feel and can relate to i think. and what amazes me more is how it reminds me of the things i would write, yet i really like yours more _
| Dying Without Gackt 6/29/05 . chapter 1
Interesting. It was a bit confusing but maybe that's just me. It flowed nicely though. Good job.
| Aquafied 6/29/05 . chapter 1
it seems hopeful, you don't get that as often anymore.
hope, trust, faith.
words i dont usually think of.
delish poem dear.
| aries-diva-JC 6/29/05 . chapter 1
great poem... the rhymes worked well... (except pain and again... my pet peeve is when ppl rhyme words with again, lol) the wording was great... good job... btw, if u have time, please r&r my work, especially 'once in a blue moon'... i'm dying for honest reviews... thanx...