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It Sounds Horrible 2005-11-05 ch 1,	abusethe ( ) are good, the layout bothers me but I suspect it my mind being a little stubborn ** again. jealousy is a horrible little emotion, isn't it? overall i enjoyed this.
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI hate when jealousy gets to me. but this is really good. like the description. ~Sorrow~
a moth in lace 2005-07-21 ch 1,	abuseI remember this... Absolutely gorgeous, as always. I do love you, my dear. -marie
hiding behind amber eyes 2005-07-18 ch 1,	abusei like the ending a lot. good job i like the comments in these things...()
kalmia raphael 2005-07-14 ch 1,	abuseyeah but sometimes one's jealous thoughts are truth. i'm still not sure about the horizontal poem - ie. the poem that reads like a paragraph... seen lots popping up but i still treat them with some... distrust. oh well. it's a very pretty poem which is cool as contrasts with horribly jealousness etc. liked eye thing as the mention of emerald eyes gave me a picture of them shining in a sea of dull blind ones. favourite line "attached to your (frail) bones."
twistedtruths 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseGreat poem, I can relate to that feeling all too well.
Aquafied 2005-06-29 ch 1,	abuse"A.N. Jealousy" And how. delish.
poetic abortion 2005-06-29 ch 1,	abusebeautiful work. ^__^ I can't count how many times I have felt this way. wonderful, wonderful work. its simply beautiful and marvelously dramatic. wonderful work, naomi! ~* noelle