This is such a great song! n,n No real nitpicks here...ryhming and flow was great, I loved the first stanza.

Whoot! ^__^ Awsome. I really liked the fifth stanza. It is amazing how we can wish great moments away to soothe the upcoming pain.

i like the repition & the title a lot.. i lvoe the stanza that you repeat a little differently each time.. nciely done

This was really great. There has been times where I feel like this and it's depressing really. Good job on writing this.

I like. I like a lot. The refrain really gets to me, which is good, because that's what it's supposed to do, and the verses are just there to support it. Anyways, good song. I like angsty, especially today because it's all rainy outside where I live, so songs like this are perfect for a day like this.

Anyways, I'd better stop typing before I start babbling like an idiot, lol. ^_^

~Vandagirl ^_^

Not bad... I like the first verse and the chorus the best!