|Reviews for Offering|
| The Postscript 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful, "spilling glowing rivers" "streams of sadness" "bottles my tears" this is all amazing work full of wonderful images. God Bless.
| catseyeview 6/29/05 . chapter 1
beautiful poem - I especially love our last lines "to hide nothing, to make my heart perservered sweetness of the winepress...just glides off the tongue.