Overall, I thought it was really good but i do have a few comments.

1. I personally despise rhyming in poetry because you have to be absolutely amazing to make it work, and you have yet to reach that level of talent. Even though it did flow better then most rhyming poetry I read, it still seemed a little choppy and limited.

2. Just an aesthetics thing- right aligning looks a lot better then centered.

Other then that, just reread everything and make sure it's saying exactly what you want it to say without the limits of the rhyme. I think you have some really great ideas, you just need to refine them.

Nice. Flowy and beautiful. Bravo!

A wonderful poem. There is relief is the smallest amount, but then where is the fun in life if you can not go looking for it?

Lovely rhythm and rhyme. Excellent description of a rainy day and the soothing power of the overcast. *grin* Keep it up!

I love the rhyming and rich colours described; however, the only break of the rhyme scheme is a lack of a rhyme for the word "orange." It just sticks out. Perhaps adjust that, otherwise lovely.

I love how you described listening to the rain, it's very, very good. especially the line "Come now, calming, singing rain." :D I love it, keep up the awesome work!

this is good, i can almost hear the rain as i read this, very surreal, sign of a good peice too, great job, keep it up thank you for the reviews