O.o wow... I didn't expect it to be this dark. But very well written. Go Cat and her deep, well-written poems^^

Woah... I can see why you called it a suspense... Very well written, Cat. I love the mood you place upon your readers; one of terror and of a heavy burden that many would soon be crushed by. Part of me wonders, even...if this is only a fiction you share, or perhaps, it is something more... Well done, Cat. Well done.