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| Moonjava 2005-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is very sweet. I like the feeling in this. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abusevery good point. this piece gave me goosebumps when I got to the part where if everything wasn't there. but...at least there is happiness and you defind it nicely ~Sorrow~ |
| eternal-reaper-kid 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abusehi there cool poem, v. sweet, gota be quick, so i say do more in this vein luvin ya workrb |
| Lifeless Prophet 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. Interesting format. But over all very good. Your Friend -L.P.- |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it. The way that it is divided like that.I know what this feels like and I can understand what this poem is about. I love it all the same. Beautiful. Keep it up. |
| aquiliusdivine 2005-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abusehey... this is pretty sad. I like it though. Its not your usual pattern and I like to see that you've broken out of the box a bit. Still lovin your stuff. Keep it up solo girl and have a very irish summer... tehe *Draconis* |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abusefantabulous job! great poem, greater poet. SP |