I loved the way you captured the girl's emotions! Well done!

I like this... it's sad, but almost everyone can relate to it in one way or another.

Cassandra

U kno what, I'm actually in this situation, I like this song it makes me feel better.

beautiful! i really liked the lyrics, they were sad but sweet at the same time.i can't get a melody in my head, but i'm sure that it would go along with anything.great job!

Aagh that's sad!! Heartfelt and--sad. I know the feeling, though despite having been through exactly this, I'm still a hopeless romantic and I believe my dream didn't work out only because God knew it wasn't the best thing for me. Love, thankfully, is something we can keep on giving--we don't have to run out of it after one or two times being "burned".

Heya! Guess who finally decided to get one of these names? Uh...actually that'd be kinda hard, since my name's already taken (>.< Just when I'd finally thought of an original title/name...gr) Well, It's PerfectlyImperfect here...sorta. Wow, this is prolly the crappiest of the crappy names I've come up with. Ah, well, I'll prolly change it before you read this since I can never settle on these things anyway.

About the poem...I really like the way you wrote it, although some of the rhyming/flow seemed a bit off at parts, like rhyming life and life. Don't take that the wrong way, just a little advice. 'Specially cos that stanza was my fave, probably the most powerful in the entire poem. Kudos. =D

Speaking of angst, I actually wrote a poem a while ago (my reason being for making this account). Prolly my only good poem, I'm gonna look for it after I type this up. I was gonna post it on ffn, prolly a Raven poem, then I was like...meh. An excuse to get an account here! n,n

So anyways, keep writing poems/songs, you're quite talented, you lucky able-to-write-romance author. *reviewer is >.

Not bad =) Although the Yvonne Elliman song is what pops into my head at the title ^^;

Thanks kindly for your review on the sue manual. It still amazes me that I get reviews on it even though I wrote it years ago. I have no problems with you linking it wherever you desire =) I've actually had people link to it on encyclopedic websites, personal webpages and even translated into a different language for another one. The funny thing is, I wrote that as a rant, not to actually be a true manual. I guess I should be glad it turned out as it has. Nearly two years later, and it's only gaining in popularity. I haven't even posted anything recently, so people are finding it from somewhere other than links from other things I've written.

I'm just taking up space, sorry. =) If you'd like to talk more, please email me. It's on the top of my profile.

TA

PS: I'm 19, and I watch Teen Titans when I'm with my 21 year old boyfriend and HE'S watching it =P So no problems with that =P I dun wanna rot...

Omg, that is so sad. Sorry it took so long for me to get around at looking at your work. I love this, it is so sad! You should put more of your work on, I am sure people will love it!

~Yunie-19

OMG, I just came up with the most awesome melody for this song!I love it. I'm gonna sing it to my cousin soon... :D

I like this a lot. So true to life. Most of us have been there or are there at the moment. I especially like the chorus. Post more songs soon! queenvixta

P.s Thanx for your review on Let Me Go. 3 Doors Down rock! lol. Yeah I wrote this song before I'd heard Let me go by them and I didn't know what else to call the song!!

This is very good, awesome job!

this was pretty good but its kinda cleche. i really couldn't tell that this acually hapened to u or if u just wanted something to write about.

very powerful and moving. lovely work!