|Reviews for Darkness in the Light|
| bulletproof.cupid 5/5/06 . chapter 1
interesting beginning, dear. "If you needn’t be seen, don’t be" - i like that right, i'll come back and read more tomorrow. need sleep.
good work, though.
| Para Noya 4/9/06 . chapter 3
WHY WOULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE? (howls) This is such a good story! I love the characters so far, you're spacing things out nicely. (puppy dog eyes) But that was a mean cliffhanger. I really wanna know what happens next, please update soon!
| shounen sister girl person hehehe 3/14/06 . chapter 3
CROSS BOW! The shadows are leik WAY better than the angels though! Alexa has knives and darkness and a cooler tower block thing. Why do those Angels show off so much anyhover? It's a bit of a tactical error. Ooh will there be a dragon!
| SarahCLICK 8/15/05 . chapter 1
Like the ideas :), its coming on really well, AH you spelt Erika with a K, its much cooler with a c. Anyway if I had helped it wouldn't be as good, luv saz
| youngANDinLOVE 7/9/05 . chapter 2
Ooh, I like this story. . The concept is really good. Update soon!
| Eyetk 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Hmm! Interesting (if short) start.
My one CC that I'd have for you is already written out on another page, which has been specifically created for this exact purpose:
| Raven's Shadow 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Hmm...Sounds interesting so far. Will the whole story be from that person's POV? Or will it switch between the two mages? Can't wait for more.