Wow, that sounds much like me and my past. Ouch. I really have sympathy for that girl, and definitely realize the tragedy of letting or making someone live like that. That sort of situation also tends to make the person even stronger, if it's the right kind of person... Ok, stopping my depressed thoughts now. You are really a remarkable poet; all your poems are really powerful. You are gifted, especially when one considers your age. I'm sorry you should have so much information or inspiration to write about these things. I wish to give you and her a hug, but some people don't like that... Anyway, good and effective writing.

Ooh! I really like it. Espically the lines:

When she cries, the tears hurtThey leave marks on her face

Good Job.

Wow, i am so feeling this right now, it is awesome, i can relate to it. I definately like your work, your going on all 3 favourites :D

very strong and emotional. i wish i thought of this myself to me this would be considered a masterpiece and it is from your friend Mandie...*huggles*

Misunderstood, a very complicated thing because everybody believes everything is so simple. Of course it's all very simple, it's just how you react to it that makes it difficult.

Your poem is beautiful :)

I thought this was amazing. I have friends who are like this, not letting anyone in, and I just wish that they would open up more. You really have a talent, never stop using it! P'Dale Buddy out

A very intriguing piece... attempting to capture the life of the silent and ignored... very well written. Good job. _

Weaves a powerful journey of one human being.

sad poem, but good. strong ending. nice job.

I Love it! I really do! I love the words, and stuff. I love the ending too! Its a wonderful piece of art! -Now just what I am going to write about. Hm.. well, luffles your poem! Oh and you!

-Desiree