|Reviews for Whispers of a Deceiver|
| Drowned-Rat 7/4/05 . chapter 1
Writtings are thouroughly artistic. Mixing dialouge with descriptions :D
Reading this makes me feel like theres a voice inside my head, which means this is going in my favorites :D KEEP WRITTING MUHAHAHAHAH!
| aries-diva-JC 7/1/05 . chapter 1
good job... u said be critical though so i'm gonna come up with sum really picky complaints lol... in the fifth line, i don't think 'inflicting' was the best word choice... maybe 'causing' would have flowed better... hm... okay, that's all i can think of... i loved the ending, especially the part where you said 'but in this life, how can i live on?'... great job, keep up the good work...
| AmaranthineMisery 6/30/05 . chapter 1
well written and very strong... keep writing
| Luthiena o Lorien 6/30/05 . chapter 1