Wow, that was very beautifully written. (Thanks for the review, by the way.)

I have read a lot of wolf-based fiction in my time, and that is well up there with the quality-published stuff. The Imagery was wonderful, And I loved what you do with your words. ("…that had made him have the title of "Myth", as in "mist"; a fog-like entity full of obscurity and mystery."; It was still dripping blood and no flies had assaulted the tender meat yet.")

I noticed you share a habit with me; you write short sentences. It was mainly in the beginning, and It actually fit with the panic and fury of the fires, and then I noticed you expanded later on.

You captured the emotions very skilfully, I felt the connection between the characters. Kudos!