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| Jenny 2007-11-11 ch 4,  | Nice story but please tell me if ur going to continue it 'cause I need more. |
| Jenny 2007-11-11 ch 1, | Does it end here?! (But I really don't think that the story really ended after 4 chapters.) I need more! This is an amazing story so please please please post more of it or could you just tell me where I could find the whole story? |
| Koharu Mitsuki 2006-05-12 ch 4,  | Wow! It's so cool! Nice story! Hope you continue this! It's really great! |
| A.Teen Psycho 2006-04-18 ch 4, | I'm so glad you finally updated! I was afriad you had left us for good! Thank you! |
| Saiyan Tear 2006-04-09 ch 4, | That was a very good chapter. However I did notice one tiny little typo, but other then that I really enjoyed it. Hope you update soon! ^_^ |
| shadowsplint 2006-03-20 ch 3, | great story! can he get any colder? let the meltdown begin! i know tat was corny keep workin on it ur doin great! |
| Tired-of-Tears 2005-09-03 ch 3, | I KNOW THE FINAL FANTASY SONG!! my friend cherrycokeislove can play that...I think its the same song...i'm still learning...This chapter was cute! |
| A.Teen Psycho 2005-08-27 ch 3, | Great Ending of a chapter, I must say!Both of them have their rough edges, but I like both of your Characters. They both have strong personalities and you can't really predict whats going to happen next in this story. This could be a manga, it is good enough to be one. Or an anime. Well, I will review your next chapter!!Update soon! Rissa |
| A.Teen Psycho 2005-08-27 ch 2, | Another VERY GOOD chapter. I loved it. But why is Sarah homeless?I NEED TO KNOW! Rissa |
| A.Teen Psycho 2005-08-27 ch 1, | This is way good!I myself, am a Japanese fan! I'm into manga and kearning to speak it.But wow, I am so glad someone wrote such a cool story!I love it! rissa |
| remae 2005-08-27 ch 3, | Haha, I'm Filipino, and I can't speak ANY Tagalog, either. Pretty sad, isn't it? Hehehe. Anyways, great chapter. It was cute near the end.^ _^ |
| Emmi 2005-08-27 ch 3, | HaHa this story is funny xD, lol the scene when sarah crashed into the door was hilarious! anyways update soon :) -Emmi |
| remae 2005-08-15 ch 2, | Haha, I loved that little scene where Sarah ran into Sousuke's door, and they were yelling at each other! |
| remae 2005-08-15 ch 1, | AH I LOVED IT. :) |
| Smittened By Marauders 2005-07-23 ch 2, | Lol, it happens. I love this chapter! |