I like this poem. Sometimes I can't find the beat, but that's entirely my fault (I suck at reading poems correctly that aren't mine). I love the repetition; it felt like you got stronger and stronger each time. Thanks for the read.

I like this. It has rythm and a certain weird style that's really interesting. I like how you have the repeted but slightly changing lines, they're very effective. Nice poem.

Wow...who's Sake? Did you write this or posted it from a friend or what? Because I'm confused as to who wrote it...But it's still a really good poem. Lots of feelings.