It's not a one-shot! It now has a second chapter just as superb as the first! How kind you are to your readers. lol. But can we get more details of how the ex is being tortured? That would be wonderful. hehehehe.

Heh. Never noticed this one before, but it's cool!!

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Oh, come on! A one-shot? That is just cruel. A story of this caliber deserves at least an ending. FINISH IT! plz?

I'm most impressed and glad to have read this! Please tell me that there will be more, I'd really like to read on!

It better not be the end! This is good. I'd like to see where you can take it from here.