I loved the line 'tomorrow is lost forever'. Very powerful, and so is the poem!

Much love, Rosanna.

well i cant makes sense of all of it, but i get certain parts of it.. even though i dont get it all tis beautifully written & the language is great & you know what.. writing is for you.. not anyone else so who cares if no one gets it

best left unexplained, I'd think. the poem is still amazing, great use of diction and remarkable use of format to convey your message. beautiful.

* noelle

This really good :) keep writing!