I'll admit, quite confusing at some points but over all it's really good. I love the ended the best. awesome job

~Sorrow~

Stunning, really. The format is exceptional, and the words are simple and profoundly mesmerising.

I'm so ashamed that I'm not this simple, this deep, and this profound. And I like the same lines that Tuesday Child likes. Lol!

Beautifully written as always. I love the reference to virginity and age.

Keep it up.

ahawesomei like this

Wow. Great job. I love how you reference virginity, adds a quality of deep innocence.

nice poem...

the way it flows is amazing."it fits./like how it's/(not) suppose to." that part is going to stay with me...it just stands out! great poem!

imperfection, is perfection.

sometimes, usually.

depends on the situation.

nice poem.

lovely. i just love it.:)

Flows nicely, and has a sincere, brutally honest quality to it.

Wow, impressive. Well done on this! This is so well written and the formatting works really well! Keep writing!

~Anna~