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| Branwen 999 2005-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abusei only enjoy black roses, maybe for the symbolism. otherwise i agree.nicely done. if a butterfly is a murderer... than what am i? (rhetoric, don't answer) -kj |
| addie pray 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and very very nightmare like. |
| amphiboly 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWHOO. someone's feeling dark, eh? hahaha. thanks for your reviews honey-bun. hhahaha. this is good. i like the "till they bleed - blood-red roses"roses are nice honey. hahaha. (: |
| Alisha Marie 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on this what an interstingview...on this poem. |
| poetic abortion 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abusethat is such a unique and gorgeous veiw on butterflies. the poem is beautifully done, the imagery is delightful as it is horrificly poignant. a lovely, lovely poem with such a wicked charm. one of your bes in my humblest opinion. ~* noelle |
| liz anya 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI like the powerful message conveyed here. Every line was very poetic and conjured up lovely imagery. Simply marvelous. |
| thank you thoughtful 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseamazing. i love love love the way you antagonized the butterfly. your writing exudes this certain kind of knowing that i cannot place but love. this is a refreshing way to look at things, despite its darker undertones. i'm babbling. i freakin' loved it. |
| smile persephone 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThat imagery sort of scares me; I could never see butterflies acting in that manner. Anyway, the poem flows beautifully and the imagery is exquisite. Wonderfully written! |