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Branwen 999
2005-12-22
ch 1, anon.
abusei only enjoy black roses, maybe for the symbolism. otherwise i agree.nicely done. if a butterfly is a murderer... than what am i? (rhetoric, don't answer)

-kj
addie pray
2005-07-05
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful and very very nightmare like.
amphiboly
2005-07-04
ch 1,
abuseWHOO. someone's feeling dark, eh? hahaha. thanks for your reviews honey-bun. hhahaha. this is good. i like the "till they bleed - blood-red roses"roses are nice honey. hahaha. (:
Alisha Marie
2005-07-03
ch 1,
abuseGreat job on this what an interstingview...on this poem.
poetic abortion
2005-07-02
ch 1,
abusethat is such a unique and gorgeous veiw on butterflies. the poem is beautifully done, the imagery is delightful as it is horrificly poignant. a lovely, lovely poem with such a wicked charm. one of your bes in my humblest opinion.

~* noelle
liz anya
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abuseI like the powerful message conveyed here. Every line was very poetic and conjured up lovely imagery. Simply marvelous.
thank you thoughtful
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abuseamazing. i love love love the way you antagonized the butterfly. your writing exudes this certain kind of knowing that i cannot place but love. this is a refreshing way to look at things, despite its darker undertones.

i'm babbling. i freakin' loved it.
smile persephone
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abuseThat imagery sort of scares me; I could never see butterflies acting in that manner. Anyway, the poem flows beautifully and the imagery is exquisite. Wonderfully written!
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