|Reviews for Thunderstorm|
| pointythings 7/17/05 . chapter 1
Personally, I think you're better off with free verse poetry. Some of the rhyming seems a little forced, and the format of repeating the second line of each stanza gets annoying, and doesn't always work. I think if you went free verse, this could be a good poem.
Yours in writing,pointythings
| Amara the Warrior 7/16/05 . chapter 1
Ohh...I like this. "As the sun slides behind the clouds". Very descriptive.