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| Reviews for Bitter Slice of Heaven |
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   Princess White turtle 9/23/05 . chapter 1wow... |
| lovelikeamixtape 9/10/05 . chapter 1 love this. the short style is one i often use- you can pack so much more emotion in without watering it down at all. great work. |
| secret thoughts revealed 7/2/05 . chapter 1 increadibly short |
| fire-breathing-kitten 7/1/05 . chapter 1 Very short, obviously, but I think you have effectively gotten as much feeling as you could into those three lines. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 7/1/05 . chapter 1 hmm... i like the oxymoron going on there... EB |
