|Reviews for Bitter Slice of Heaven|
| Princess White turtle 9/23/05 . chapter 1
| lovelikeamixtape 9/10/05 . chapter 1
love this. the short style is one i often use- you can pack so much more emotion in without watering it down at all. great work.
| secret thoughts revealed 7/2/05 . chapter 1
| fire-breathing-kitten 7/1/05 . chapter 1
Very short, obviously, but I think you have effectively gotten as much feeling as you could into those three lines.
| Elizabeth Bilberry 7/1/05 . chapter 1
hmm... i like the oxymoron going on there...