   Sorrowful Dreams 2005-07-22 . chapter 1number 10 seemed to make me laugh somehow...but never mind me. I don't think I was supposed to but yeah. nice work on this.
~Sorrow~ |
 Alisha Marie 2005-07-04 . chapter 1Great job on this I really liked it! |
 The Proxy Ninja 2005-07-03 . chapter 1E!
This was so lovely! |
 jaepoe 2005-07-02 . chapter 1cool incorporation of the commandments, very unique poem. |
 poetic abortion 2005-07-02 . chapter 1I'm such a bad catholic, I forgot the seventh commandment ... I feel bad! a very nteresting poem, one that I found quite fun to read. beautifully written and conveyed in such an abstract sense. wonderful work.
~* noelle |
 my failure 2005-07-01 . chapter 1wow. i really like this.:) |
 account not in use 2005-07-01 . chapter 1Deffinetaly makes you think. Very good job! |
 Aquafied 2005-07-01 . chapter 1i like it, i have to admit though, i dont really know all of the commandments by heart.
o, yes, nice poem. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-01 . chapter 1Nice incorporation of the commandments, provides thought. |
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