wow intense i really like the poem someone else keep up the good work hun. ^_^

So much pent up emotions are flowing through this poem. You did a wonderful job on writing this.

wow, love the anger! i just hate it when guys do that, they can be really shallow...

loved the 2nd verse a lot...:)

Very powerful. Guys can be such jerks sometimes, you know. Sometimes you have to wonder if it would be better without them.

Sounds fimilar. Good writing though. Keep it up!