ah yes, 's poem 'picture frame lies'... i remember that one- it was a brilliant poem, and this continuation does it justice, although it does show a bit that this was not an easy write for you.

The last stanza is what packed the most punch and left me with a aching, profound feeling.

Wonderful.

Wow. Just...I love this. I raelly can't say anything else, but I am being dead honest, painfully honest, my god, you are good...

oo nice poem. you certainly did do a nice job with the whole lesbian thing. it's a great poem, i love it. beautiful.

Once again, wonderfully written. I loved this line: "lipstick letters (bright, fake red)".

I'm adding you to my favorite authors if that's alright with you.

*clapclapclap* And once agian, my hands burn up in the atmosphere.

interesting.

I really like this... your a wonderful poet

Lol you really have a knack for endings. Very mysterious and fun to

'Light and snowy' is what I thought. Which is strange, because you've put 'in between the thin/sheets of snow;' which I'd though I missed.. Good poem.

very interesting... by the way, I'm Sunday's child. -smiles secretively-

Beautiful! Don't worry, I didn't think you were gay when I read it. Anyway, the descriptions of everything are so vivid. Excellent job!

Nicely written.

wow, i feel the emotion and work put into this poem the passion is sometimes overwhelming great job!

Great job...I really liked it! Don't know what else to say. Great job!